Agony-Chapter 5
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You have created a monster. That was a very dark chapter. If Jarrod was estranged from the family their anguish and guilt will be all the deeper.Great writing TC, please please
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I do hope that Nick and Heath have some idea of the kind of man they are hunting and I also hope that Nick has calmed down somewhat and is not blinded by blood-lust when he does catch up to...
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I think if you put all the evil people in the Valley together, it still wouldn't match the evil in Henshaw! Nick and Heath better watch themselves! And poor Jarrod, having to go through all that.
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ohhhh-I had to take a deep breath after that--BRILLIANT writing! all of it--powerful--excellent the way you are revealing what has led up to Jarrod's attack--what an evil man--now, are Nick and Heath...
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That is so sad, he lost his baby too!!!!So with all this stuff happening, you wonder what Jarrod's psyche is like. Would he have any will to live after all this? The family has got their work cut out...
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First Comment JARROD BREATH OK now I got that over with, what another intense chapter and way, way, way too short. How heartbreaking for Jarrod to lose two people that seemed to mean the world to him....
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That was a very powerful and effective chapter and given that I am a bit on the squeamish side I appreciated the sensitivity with which you wrote it. This is a riveting chapter.
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That was a very intense dark chapter. What an evil monster you have created. Nick needs Heath if he wants to take down the evil. No one can do it alone. Hopefully Heath will catch up soon. I wonder...
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What an incredible chapter! Very intense. Can we learn soon why the family was "separated" during this time? I hope Heath catches up to Nick soon and together they not only stop Henshaw but... well...
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